The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 

future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the present plan of an industrial zone in Norbiton
,
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and
proposed
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development of the place.
Overall
, the industrial zone is set to be changed into a residential area with
construction
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of houses and amenities.
In addition
, the
road
will be extended and a bridge will be built to connect
two
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sides of the river. At the present time, an industrial area is surrounded by a river and farmland to the north, a town to the west and a long
road
to the south. The long
road
is connected to the roundabout with three factories around it, which
also
has a
road
to the east of it that provides a path to other factory buildings. In the future, factories will be demolished and new residential houses and amenity buildings,
such
as shops, medical
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playground
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and
school
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will be constructed
instead
. The
road
will go through a number of changes, with the building of a bridge and
construction
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of a new smaller roundabout on the long
road
being the main
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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