The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps illustrate the present plan of an industrial zone in Norbiton

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and

proposed

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the proposed

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development of the place.

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, the industrial zone is set to be changed into a residential area with

construction

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the construction

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of houses and amenities.

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, the

road

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will be extended and a bridge will be built to connect

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sides of the river. At the present time, an industrial area is surrounded by a river and farmland to the north, a town to the west and a long

road

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to the south. The long

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is connected to the roundabout with three factories around it, which

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has a

road

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to the east of it that provides a path to other factory buildings. In the future, factories will be demolished and new residential houses and amenity buildings,

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as shops, medical

centre

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playground

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playgrounds

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and

school

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will be constructed

instead

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. The

road

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will go through a number of changes, with the building of a bridge and

construction

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the construction

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of a new smaller roundabout on the long

road

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being the main

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ones

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