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numerous merits.

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issue has some inevitable merits that I shall discuss my view in upbringing paragraphs. The main reason that stimulates parents to encourage their

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self-contained.

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to put their social abilities

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responsible and a loyal person.

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needs by their incomes.

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between two semesters consider

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they are provided for

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in future.

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person may have some drawbacks. Due to poverty and other reason,

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damage the infrastructure of society because they will

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education opportunities.

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some employees abuse

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has some benefits like improving the self-contained and will

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better

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prospect

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. These reasons convince me to agree with

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