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Your friend will be staying at home but you can be their with him because of some reasons so write letter in which you can explain How to the keys How to use electrical appliances Recommend some interesting places to visit.

#friend #home #keys #appliances #places #visit
Dear John, I hope
this
 letter finds you in
best
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the best
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 of
your
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apply
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health and spirit. I am glad you are visiting my home and unfortunately I will not be available during the week
20-9-2022
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of 20-9-2022
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 to 27-09-2002 because I will be on a business trip to another city. You can get the keys from the watchman and his name is Kumar, please tell him that you are my friend who will stay in house 5 on
9th
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the 9th
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 floor
then
 he will give the visitors
form
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a form
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 to fill in your details before giving the keys. The coffee machine works after you turn on the green button which is behind the machine and make sure
plug-in
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plug in
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 the toaster before using it. The microwave is automatic and can be used directly. You can visit the Lakeside shopping mall, Neil Peter park and a local library
with
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within
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 a short stroll from my home. I hope you enjoy
the
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your
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 stay at my home and will meet you soon. Warm Wishes, Santosh
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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