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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that a vast number of
people
 will prefer visiting their own country on holiday to travelling elsewhere in the future.I entirely disagree with
this
 notion.
First
 of all,as the transport system has developed,the number of overseas travellers will increase because nowadays,it is quite obvious that both ground and air transport have made progress in security during the
last
 few years and they will be continuing for raising the quality and safety of transportation.
In other words
,
people
 have more chances to travel worldwide by conserving their time and it will be safer and more convenient.Numerous
countries
 are building airports in order to accept a lot of foreigners.
Additionally
,the governments in developing
countries
 encourage tourists to travel to their
countries
,so as to improve their economy I
also
 believe that going to the other country on holiday will help
people
 to obtain precious experiences like mixing other cultures and discovering new untouchable places.Especially,
people
 who have a burning passion for history.They have the opportunity to go to historical cities
such
 as Afina,Istanbul and Roma.Excursions to historical monuments may create unmemorable memories for visitors.
Furthermore
, travelling has a positive impact on
people
 in terms of psychology because travelling to different kinds of
countries
 makes
people
 open-minded and broadens their horizons.
That is
 why
therefore
people
 should spend their holiday going to foreign
countries
. To conclude,I completely disagree with the statement of many
people
 will visit their own country
instead
 of travelling abroad because there are a lot of advantages of acquiring information about a different culture and getting to know
people
 from different
countries
.
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