Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.
crowd
have different views about accommodating assistance for Add an article
the crowd
artists
such
as poets, musicians, etc. while some people agree that it is a waste of money I believe supporting artists
is beneficial for the majority of people themselves as well as the artists
.
There are several reasons why people are disagreeing with affording assistance to artists
. It is unfortunate that they regard it as a waste of money as well as they believe that this
money should be spent on more important parts of the community such
as public transition, medical facilities or amenities for educational systems. Although
those facilities and amenities are necessary to be provided we should consider this
question as well how artists
can accommodate the equipment that they need? For sure the government must be concerned about it as much as other squadrons.
By contrast
, I believe that artists
who create beauty have a wide role in our lives. for instance
, imagine a tough day which makes u exhausted and you feel extremely tired both mentally and physically and suddenly a soft sound of piano starts playing with your mind and soul whether you playing it or someone else. Sometimes you feel pretty bored so you decide to watch a movie, a movie which you can consider a piece of art and refresh your mind via watching it. It is undeniable that our world is considerable beautiful with artists
and art.
In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of supporting artists
and providing assistance by the government do outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by Yasrayak on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite