Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

crowd have different views about accommodating assistance for

artists

such

as poets, musicians, etc.

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some people agree that it is a waste of money I believe supporting

artists

is beneficial for the majority of people themselves

as well as

the

artists

. There are several reasons why people are disagreeing with affording assistance to

artists

. It is unfortunate that they regard it as a waste of money

as well as

they believe that

this

money should be spent on more important parts of the community

such

as public transition, medical facilities or amenities for educational systems.

Although

those facilities and amenities are necessary to be provided we should consider

this

question as well how

artists

can accommodate the equipment that they need? For sure the government must be concerned about it as much as other squadrons.

By contrast

, I believe that

artists

who create beauty have a wide role in our lives.

for instance

, imagine a tough day which makes

u

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you

exhausted and you feel extremely tired both mentally and physically and suddenly

a

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soft sound of

piano

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a piano

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starts playing with your mind and soul whether you playing it or someone else. Sometimes you feel pretty bored so you decide to watch a movie, a movie which you can consider a piece of art and refresh your mind via watching it. It is undeniable that our world is

considerable

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beautiful with

artists

and art. In conclusion, I would argue that the advantages of supporting

artists

and providing assistance by the government do outweigh the disadvantages.