You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Kyle Walker, I am writing with reference to the complaint raised by you about the frequent noise you heard from my apartment for the
last
couple of days. Let me explain the situation in detail, my
brother
's family visited my place
last
weekend with his
children
. These days, I go to work every day and my
brother
's family is at home.
Therefore
,
children
are staying home throughout the day and they have been making noises. We are sorry to bother you. Actually, I have not realised that you have been disturbed until I received a complaint from you. I have told my
brother
to keep their
children
occupied with something , so they would not make noises. But , it looks like it has not worked. My
Brother
's family and I are planning to go on a summer holiday by the end of the week. Until
then
, I would request my
brother
to take out the
children
outside to a park or playground so that they can have fun without disturbing others. Yours sincerely, Harry Maguire
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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