The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter with a request in order to take an action towards the rubbish collection system in 4th street, Sydney road as it is not working properly . With regards to

this

, the collection of the trashes has been stopped for 5 days. All the wastes are accumulated in the waste bin and it is overflowing.

Moreover

, the awful smell is

also

spreading to the nearest areas.

Additionally

, as

this

system is located near the bus station all the localities are facing very difficulties taking the bus and they cannot stand there for more than two minutes due to the smell.

On the other hand

, we contacted the town authority regarding

this

issue but still today they did not take any suitable action to remove the trashes. I request you to send some town keepers to take it from there as soon as possible. Anticipating a quick resolution from your side. Yours faithfully Rose Jenny

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