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What are the macroeconomic effects of foreign direct investment on fragile five countries? Give your opinion.

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Hi everyone! I am standing here today to tell you
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how to learn
English
. Before I start, I want to tell you something: my presentation today isn’t something trite and hollow that I copied from Google because
this
 presentation is everything I’ve
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 from my journey of learning
English
. And I feel that I am eligible to give
this
 presentation because I’ve applied everything
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here to have a B1 certificate in the Toefl test when I’m in 3rd grade, a B2 certificate in 4th grade and I’ve just completed the
Ielts
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 test. So I’m just going to tell you about how to get better
in
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 speaking
English
. I’m going to save other skills for later and now, let’s dive deeper
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this
 topic. A lot of people are afraid of speaking
English
 because they are afraid of making mistakes. But how can you communicate in a language fluently if you don’t speak it? so
first
 things
first
, in order to speak something, you need to listen. Try to listen 24/7 to
English
 if you can. The average person
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 10.000 hours of listening to fluently speak a new language. Listen even if you don’t really concentrate on it. Consider it
a
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background noise! But still, after a week, you can see that you’re quickly absorbing a lot of
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. Try to speak
English
 every day. What? You don’t have a companion? You can speak to yourself! Try to think and speak
English
 when you see every single thing around you. Spot
English
 everywhere you go. It can be an advertisement
,
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 or just a bulletin board. Simple, right? Before you waste any time, apply
this
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