Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.

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hold different views about whether it is better for their country to stream other foreign

movies

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and TV shows or whether it is needed to make their own TV programmes and films locally. It is my firm belief that importing these will be beneficial for the country. On the one hand, it is argued that a lot of

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are big fans of many masterpieces like DC and Marvel’s

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and they are watching these using online platforms like Netflix and HBO.

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, a number of

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need to know the international language to watch them, but if the local channels buy a license for showing these

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they can both earn money and create content in their mother tongue.

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, these video materials can help

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to learn about the cultures

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and cuisines of others.

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, one who is watching “Big-Bang Theory” which is an American sitcom can see their daily life.

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, I believe that if anyone wants to create these films locally, it will be expensive.

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, it costs about five hundred million dollars to film the Titanic movie and it has a lot of visual effects, and talented actors and it is not easy to earn all expenditures from the box office performance in small countries.

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assimilation of these is almost impossible. The reason is that it can cause a lot of legal issues because of plagiarism. In conclusion,

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some believe that localization of these properties is efficient, I agree with those who believe that using the original version of foreign

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and programmes is better.

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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.

Your opinion

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter Say how you heard about the plan Explain how you feel about it Ask for more information about it

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