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Sir/Madam, I, Hafeez Unnisa,
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 in Qatar with a valid Residence Permit. I wish to apply for any suitable position in the department of Engineering & Technology. In fact, even I am ready to work voluntarily, without any salary. I possess the necessary skills and qualifications, as well as the essential experience. I have a Master's Degree in Engineering (M.TECH. in "Electronics and Communication Engineering" with Distinction), affiliated with JNTU (Jawaharlal Nehru Technological University), Hyderabad, India.
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, my Degree certificates are attested with Mofa Qatar and WES Canada. I may be contacted at (+974)-50825799 or by email at [email protected]. Thank you for your time. Regards, Hafeez
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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