The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

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The main features of the

island

that is

made for

tourist

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tourists

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are; first and most important the roads and footpath are formed for easiness of

tourist

either to walk on

footpath

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the footpath

a footpath

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or through their vehicles on

roads

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the roads

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Then

after entering

into

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the

island

there is a reception where people can stay and can think

where

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about where

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to go either into

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accommodation or into

restaurant

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the restaurant

a restaurant

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. Near to the

restaurants

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restaurant's

restaurants'

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accommodations where

tourist

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tourists

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can sit and enjoy the weather. The

island

covers

the

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area of 100 meters.

Island

beauty is

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enhanced by these dates trees as

provides

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shade to the

tourist

. The

island

is abandoned before its construction and

then

this

island

changes its look from abandoned to more attractive buildings

such

the

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restaurant, accommodations,

and

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roads and

footpath

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footpaths

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it changed the complete scenario before and after.

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the left side of

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the island

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island

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,island

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there is a beach where

tourist

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tourists

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can swim and some

tourist

families come here to sit on a boat and enjoy the sea creatures and the blue sky.

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