The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables give information about the amount of money spent on Fairtrade
coffee
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and bananas in the
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in 1999 and 2004. Looking at the details, it is evident that the revenues of Fairtrade
coffee
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increased across all
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the
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five European nations,
whereas
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those of Fairtrade bananas only increased in three of these nations.
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, the consumption
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both items was significantly highest in the
UK
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. In terms of revenue, the sale of
coffee
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brought in 3
million
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euros
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in Swiss in 1999, followed by 1.5 and 1.8
million
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in total in the
UK
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and Denmark,
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. Sweden at the moment had the lowest amount, which was 0.8
million
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euros
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. Until 2004 , the
UK
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had surpassed all other countries in terms of earnings from
coffee
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sales, with a total of 20
million
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euros
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. The other statistics only increased by around 0.2 to 3
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euros
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over a period of 5 years. The
UK
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consistently placed first in terms of banana sales, reaching 15
million
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euros
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by 1999, which increased thrice over five years. Revenues in Switzerland and Belgium
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increased as well, to 5.5 and 4, correspondingly,
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the opposite was the case for Sweden and Denmark, where the statistics fell by roughly 1
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euros
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during the same time period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, uk, million, euros with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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