Many young people spend a lot of time on the Internet without any parental supervision or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the Internet and what can be done to curb these problems?

Some
people
opine that a wide range of teenagers
waste
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a great number of
time
on the
Internet
without any parental direction or regulation.
This
has resulted in several problems that need to be tackled as soon as possible. The primary reason would be
that young
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people
using many times on the
Internet
in order to play games or surfing on social networking sites
such
as Instagram or Facebook. If they waste their
time
doing it
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uncontrolled, it can lead to neglecting
of
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their study or work. Another reason is that adolescents may have trouble getting enough exercise, and they may end up having health risks like obesity or eye strain. The
last
problem of using the
internet
without
parents
' supervision is the young maybe can meet some bad content like reactive, violent and depraved.
However
, the problems described above
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not intractable. The simplest measure is that
parents
should set
time
limits for young
people
and create fun activities so that they forget about
Internet
usage. A
second
measure would be to avoid affecting health,
parents
should give young
people
healthy foods that are good for young
people
's eyes
such
as fish,
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meat.
Besides
,
parents
should
also
encourage them to boost physical activities or do household chores to no longer depend on the
Internet
. Another solution is probably to use software to monitor
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actions to prevent them from accessing black websites. In conclusion, using a lot of
time
on the
Internet
is a big problem that affects young
people
. It's mainly caused by an unhealthy lifestyle and without parental supervision
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and results in severe health problems and academic performance decline.
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