You are attending a part of course in the college. Due to some problem you cannot continue your course. write a letter to your teacher. describe the course explain the problem tell the teacher about your future plans

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in your college, pursuing a Master's degree in Business Administration. I have already completed the

first

year session and topped in my class and in the whole college. I have always received an appreciation for my hard work and concept clarity in class. I am writing

this

letter to sadly inform you that, due to unavoidable circumstances I will not be able to continue my degree at your college. As my father serves in the army, he got transferred to another state which is far from

this

institute. Being a single child, I have never got permission to live alone in the hostel or in PGs. As I have already completed one year of learning and achieved

such

a good reputation, I am considering continuing

this

course in another institute which is nearer to my new house. So I wanted to request you to provide me with the school leaving certificate and a character certificate to get an opportunity at that institute. I was very glad to have

such

an amazing teaching staff. Hope you will understand my position and grant me the requested certificates. Yours Sincerely, Shivam

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

194 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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