You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with an article that you published in an international travel magazine.It was about my hometown and you have given a lot of incorrect information about the city.

First

,I would like to inform you that Sumgait is one of the cleanest cities in my country but you mentioned that the air pollution level is more than that of other cities.

This

opinion is just beyond imagination.

Further

this

,you claimed the quality of city life.

However

, the unemployment and homelessness rates are fewer compared to other megapolises. Your daily is one of the most famous magazines all over the world but you do not comprehend that these kinds of fake reports would diminish your popularity and reliability.

As a result

,your fans may avoid purchasing your newspapers I hope that you will be careful when you write about publishing something.I

also

believe that all data will be checked before publication. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Mon Sep 26 2022

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
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