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Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages？

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In the past decade
industries
 and businesses are moving from urban
areas
 to small cities, As ,debatable it sounds like
people
 talking about
this
 topic a lot these days. In my ,opinion the benefits of ,relocating companies to rural
areas
 are more than its adverse effects. I will discuss both pros and cons of the same in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with, When
people
 move their
industries
 to rural
areas
 they can make huge profit in comparison to later. There are various factors that are responsible for it
for example
 cheap labour, open land etc.
Secondly
, There is less competition and
hence
 they can make a good brand. Once popular in that area Companies can enhance their zone to another area and so on.
In addition
 to
this
 relocation can
,
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actually be a good idea in terms of the health of
people
 as well. When moved to places with fewer
people
 they can actually minimize the hazards that are produced because of chemicals generated by industry.
Hence
 it actually saves a lot of
people
's health like
this
.
On the other hand
 , It is impossible for some
industries
 to survive because of less market in rural
areas
 and can be difficult for them to survive. To conclude, I restate there are more advantages if
industries
 relocate to place other the big cities.
however
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 a balance needs to be maintained so that it does not end up polluting rural
areas
 as well.
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