Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In

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fast-paced world, it is believed that economic progress is an essential component for a

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to be successful.

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, it is

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argued that there are other aspects that needed to focus on too aside from the economy. The following paragraphs will explain these two conflicting views and give a logical conclusion on the said matter. Economic progress is vital in

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country

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because it can bring more fund

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beneficial for the

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and community. Once they generate wealth, it opens better career opportunities, and the development of infrastructures and can somehow help with

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issues in the

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. For an instance, some

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from developing areas prefer to work overseas for the reason that there are more career opportunities there. But if the

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is progressive economically, they can stay and have the career progression that they desire.

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, roads, buildings as well as public transportation can be

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improved with the government’s money. Importantly, with the

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issues

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happening now, a progressive

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can combat the crisis by producing its goods and service locally. One example is the

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of China, even if the

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rate continues to increase, it is able to survive

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because of its economy.

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, there are

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some areas that I believe are equally important too.

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is the strengthening of healthcare

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in

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country

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. In

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COVID period,

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realise how hard and expensive it is to get sick. In

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-world countries,

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continue to die because of not having the access to healthcare

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. If a

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would focus on providing quality health

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like employing more trained staff, building more hospitals, and giving affordable

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to

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there can be an improvement in the death rates of

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country

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. Aside from health, education

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is an essential aspect. Allotting time, effort and money to education can help students to be competitive globally. In conclusion, as others argue that economic progress is an important goal in

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country

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, I totally oppose it. In my perspective, for a

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to be successful and progressive, it should focus not only on its economy but

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on health and education.