Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In
this
fast-paced world, it is believed that economic progress is an essential component for a country
to be successful. On the other hand
, it is also
argued that there are other aspects that needed to focus on too aside from the economy. The following paragraphs will explain these two conflicting views and give a logical conclusion on the said matter.
Economic progress is vital in one’s
country
because it can bring more fund that is
beneficial for the country
and community. Once they generate wealth, it opens better career opportunities, and the development of infrastructures and can somehow help with inflation
issues in the country
. For an instance, some people
from developing areas prefer to work overseas for the reason that there are more career opportunities there. But if the country
is progressive economically, they can stay and have the career progression that they desire. Also
, roads, buildings as well as public transportation can be also
improved with the government’s money. Importantly, with the inflation
issues that is
happening now, a progressive country
can combat the crisis by producing its goods and service locally. One example is the country
of China, even if the inflation
rate continues to increase, it is able to survive inflation
because of its economy.
However
, there are also
some areas that I believe are equally important too. First
is the strengthening of healthcare services
in one’s
country
. In this
COVID period, people
realise how hard and expensive it is to get sick. In third
-world countries, people
continue to die because of not having the access to healthcare services
. If a country
would focus on providing quality health services
like employing more trained staff, building more hospitals, and giving affordable services
to people
then
there can be an improvement in the death rates of one’s
country
. Aside from health, education also
is an essential aspect. Allotting time, effort and money to education can help students to be competitive globally.
In conclusion, as others argue that economic progress is an important goal in one’s
country
, I totally oppose it. In my perspective, for a country
to be successful and progressive, it should focus not only on its economy but also
on health and education.Submitted by feline_magno on
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