In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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It’s true that citizens have different views about spending money on a

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. Others think that it’s essential to invest significant amounts of financial support for building new railroads for trains between cities.

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, other people hold the notion government needs to promote the system improvement of existing public

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. On the one

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, building new railroads bring along not only benefits but

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drawbacks. As for the benefits, there are 2 factors worth mentioning including convenience, time-saving and less traffic.

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, if the

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has more new railway lines we would come to more local in our

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and don’t need to use much money for the come address you want because we maybe will have a road that leads directly to that place.

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, we won’t need to waste much time waiting, there will be many trains for us to choose

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but not least, we would sure save time and can go home at the correct time because the

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had many railroads so the traffic jams will be solved. Regarding the drawback, the

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may need a re-planning street system for building train stations and places to put train tracks.

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to taking up space to build, citizens

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have to spend a lot of for

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new construction.

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, better improvement of existing public

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vehicles offers different pros and cons. When it comes to the advantages, dill people still keep they are old

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and it is less economical than we choose to build new ones. But the disadvantage of

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is if we do like

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, we just improve and reuse the old ones, we are not updating modern

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for a

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so that the

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will not keep up with the globalization of the world. A relevant illustration of

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would be that in the world we are using electricity for

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now but in your

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still use cars, buses and trains that consume too much fuel it’s really not good. Personality, I agree with another option that both measures should go

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. All in all, the transition is very crucial for a

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because it will promote travel increase and help the economy develop. But if we only focus on the new aspects, we are overlooking the fundamental basics of a

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. What actually matters is that the government-private sector and individuals should have a positive attitude to ward different promising innovation methods and willing to start the projects if they are equivalent.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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