You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day, and cannot afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation that you will pay as soon as your parents send the money Also, mention that there are some pridem with the flat.

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Dear Mrs Aswal, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that due to an unfortunate incident I will not be able to deposit

this

month's rent on time.

Last

week, when I was withdrawing

money

from the nearby ATM, a gang of four people suddenly attacked me and snatched all my

money

. Luckily, I got escaped from the place and

also

reported the incident to the police. Since I lost all of my

money

, I asked my parent to deposit some

money

in my bank as early as possible. Hopefully, I will get the

money

by end of

this

week and I will send it to you via e-transfer. I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused to you due to

this

delay as you might need

this

money

for some other purpose.

Also

, I would like to talk to you regarding some problems with the flat. The major problem is in the washroom, water is not draining out properly. It is taking too much time. I tried different alternatives

such

as adding some chemicals but no luck. I hope you could connect with an expert plumber who can look into

this

and fix it. I am looking forward to your response. Ward Regards, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Tue Sep 27 2022

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

207 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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