You live in an english speaking country and you want to do some voluntary and unpaid work in a dveloping country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long - Explain why you want to do voluntary work - State what your skills and experience are

Dear Sir, I am writing to explore
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a trip to any developing countries where I can
also
do some voluntary and unpaid work. I have always believed that if one is blessed in their life, they should give it back to
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society. Since
last
year, I was looking for
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opportunity to volunteer for any unpaid work in a developing nation, but could not find any. Recently, my friend told me about your company : Cultural Expeditions, which provides
such
trips. The main reason for which I decided to volunteer is to help the needy people, that do not have access to better facilities.
In addition
to
this
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exposure to the lives of people in the developing world and the challenges that they face in their daily life. I am a doctor by profession, and I am
practicing
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here in Canada for
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10 years.
Although
all countries are progressing very fast nowadays, I feel that access to good medical services is still a challenge there. I would be more than happy
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if my skills could be used to make someone's life better. Please let me know if you have any suitable opportunity for me. Yours faithfully, Aman Malik
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