The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The first line graph outlines how the electrical appliance ownership in
households
in a Use synonyms
country
transformed during a century commencing from 1920 Use synonyms
while
the second chart delineates how it had affected the time spent on household Linking Words
work
per week by the citizens in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
.
As a general trend, with the increasing number of electrical devices possessed by Use synonyms
families
, their need for doing housework significantly declined.
As the graph reveals, only 30 Use synonyms
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
households
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
used to have Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaners and four out of ten Use synonyms
families
had washing machines in 1920. Refrigerators were Use synonyms
a
rare electric Correct article usage
apply
appliance
at that time. Just after two decades, Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
however
, refrigerator possessions shoot up, and almost half of the Linking Words
families
owned these three electric items in their homes. More Use synonyms
families
started to own Use synonyms
such
devices and at the beginning of the twenty-first century, almost all Linking Words
households
had fridges and Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaners. The washing machine was owned by more than 70% of Use synonyms
families
which slowly but steadily increased till 2019. At that point, there was hardly any family without a refrigerator or Use synonyms
vacuum
cleaner.
It is interesting to note that, with the increasing number of electric appliances owned by Use synonyms
families
, their need for doing household Use synonyms
work
like preparing meals, cleaning and washing clothes remarkably diminished. Use synonyms
While
they used to Linking Words
work
for 50 hours a week doing Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
work
in 1920, it decreased to 20 hours in 1960 and 10 in 2019.
These charts explain the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in Use synonyms
households
in one Use synonyms
country
from 1920 to 2019.
In general, the usage of electrical machines has been increasing in the past Use synonyms
around
100 years and Change preposition
apply
consequently
, the workload of housekeeping has been decreasing.
The most notable change is the rising share of refrigerators. Linking Words
Although
the percentage, at the beginning of Linking Words
this
data, was nearly 0 per Linking Words
cent
, it skyrocketed continuously from 1920 to 1960. In 1940 it was almost the same amount of share with Use synonyms
other
two appliances. Correct article usage
the other
Besides
, in 1980, it reached 100 per Linking Words
cent
and stayed Use synonyms
remain
after that. Wrong verb form
remained
By contrast
, in the early 20th, the washing machine had the top rate out of these three Linking Words
however
, after 1960, the share has been unchanged at around 70 per Linking Words
cent
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the popularity of the Linking Words
vacuum
cleaner had been steadily climbing until 2000 when it reached 100 per Use synonyms
cent
.Use synonyms
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