The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The first line graph outlines how the electrical appliance ownership in
households
in a country
transformed during a century commencing from 1920 while
the second chart delineates how it had affected the time spent on household work
per week by the citizens in this
country
.
As a general trend, with the increasing number of electrical devices possessed by families
, their need for doing housework significantly declined.
As the graph reveals, only 30 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
households
in this
country
used to have vacuum
cleaners and four out of ten families
had washing machines in 1920. Refrigerators were a
rare electric Correct article usage
apply
appliance
at that time. Just after two decades, Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
however
, refrigerator possessions shoot up, and almost half of the families
owned these three electric items in their homes. More families
started to own such
devices and at the beginning of the twenty-first century, almost all households
had fridges and vacuum
cleaners. The washing machine was owned by more than 70% of families
which slowly but steadily increased till 2019. At that point, there was hardly any family without a refrigerator or vacuum
cleaner.
It is interesting to note that, with the increasing number of electric appliances owned by families
, their need for doing household work
like preparing meals, cleaning and washing clothes remarkably diminished. While
they used to work
for 50 hours a week doing such
work
in 1920, it decreased to 20 hours in 1960 and 10 in 2019.
These charts explain the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households
in one country
from 1920 to 2019.
In general, the usage of electrical machines has been increasing in the past around
100 years and Change preposition
apply
consequently
, the workload of housekeeping has been decreasing.
The most notable change is the rising share of refrigerators. Although
the percentage, at the beginning of this
data, was nearly 0 per cent
, it skyrocketed continuously from 1920 to 1960. In 1940 it was almost the same amount of share with other
two appliances. Correct article usage
the other
Besides
, in 1980, it reached 100 per cent
and stayed remain
after that. Wrong verb form
remained
By contrast
, in the early 20th, the washing machine had the top rate out of these three however
, after 1960, the share has been unchanged at around 70 per cent
. Finally
, the popularity of the vacuum
cleaner had been steadily climbing until 2000 when it reached 100 per cent
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