A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sam, I hope

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letter finds you well,I'm so glad that you accept my offer to travel to Chalus on the

first

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day of summer. As far as you may remember,when we were children, we went to Chalus Road,are you minded? I'm sure

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trip

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is very funny,as we want to camp in the jungle so that we will see a variety of animals and birds. During the

trip

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,maybe we facing to danger situations!

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,there are wild animals,tigger and bear

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,as we want to sleep in the jungle so probably there have many insects so if you have energetic you should carry your medicines. Well,I would like to go to travel,as you are my close friend as I have been familiar with you since I was a kid.

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, I prefer we go on a

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together and I'm sure

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camping will be memorable. I hope you are ready for

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trip

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, See you soon, Mohammad

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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157 words

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