There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Money

had always been gradually considered as

one

of the most crucial elements to promote workers staying in the company, especially consumerism has already brought waves up to different age groups

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nowadays.

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fortune becomes the most fundamental reason to remain in the workplace than other factors. In general, hobbies and idealizations can likely be treated as crucial reasons for workers to stay in

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current

job

. Life is not merely surrounded by less meaningful issues, though ideality had universally been recognized as the food of a healthy mindset, due to the mental motivation companioned by interests is different from what materials bring.

Therefore

, some people never take

money

as

one

of the conditions, especially when they look for the desired

job

.

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filmmakers both request creativity, which can only be stimulated by enthusiasm and devotion to a great

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.

Conversely

, people who treat

money

as the

first

priority is basically because of the pursuit

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basic needs,

such

as food, insurance or transportation while there is normally no other

one

offering these unconditionally and working is seemingly the only way to

fulfill

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all the previous conditions, even it is probably not what the

employee

aspire to. On

one

hand, the

job

which enables the

employee

to become ambitious

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nonetheless

might be unable to require basic needs, will tend to come up with tough times.

On the other hand

, a

job

with less passion, but enabling the

employee

to completely acquire daily needs, will normally

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not prompt the

employee

to quit. In conclusion, hobbies and idealization are two attractive causes because of

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charged and electric power, which allows people to improve on the spiritual level.

However

, it is

also

significant to take care of basic living conditions at

first

,

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any kind of amusements would become a tale of a tub. For all the reasons above, hobbies and idealizations may pale beside

money

when employees make decisions of remaining in the workforce.