You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Jovan I hope you are doing well.The reason I am writing is to let you know about your live performance at the Olympic stadium in Baku that I attended.It was the masterpiece of your work and I was mesmerized by your voice. As I am a big follower of yours,I could not miss your concert.

Moreover

,I purchased a ticket from the front row.I was surprised by your scene dress and showing.All of the were well prepared.I am sure most of the spectators enjoy watching

this

magnificent staging I have been playing the piano since my childhood.I have a deep understanding of rhythm.

In other words

,I have a sense of music.

Additionally

,I intend to boost my musical knowledge in a foreign country.I will be moving to Italy in order to take a course in chor. I want to be taught by you because I am aware of your personal skills and you have a lot of successful students and I would like to be one of them.

Furthermore

,as I mentioned,I am about to come to your country and

this

would be a great chance to meet you and get important advice Thank you for devoting your precious time to reading my letter Yours faithfully Malik Maliki

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Tue Sep 27 2022

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8 paragraphs

202 words

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
talent
repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
resonate
aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
harmonize
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