Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe teenagers will have the ability to learn more effectively by watching TV and should
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encouraged to watch more of it regularly at their private residence or school. In Correct quantifier usage
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essay, I will explain why I do not agree with Linking Words
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statement.
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Firstly
, letting children watch television on their own would expose them to random content which is not appropriate for their age Linking Words
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getting view problems at an early age. Youngsters will have access to any kind of movies or shows that could hurt them when they become older. Linking Words
For instance
, children under 15 years of age have been banned from watching TV in China. Linking Words
Besides
, experts have done studies that showed that younger viewers’ eyes are more sensitive and will be harmed in the process of staring at the screen. Linking Words
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Secondly
, broadcast content has Linking Words
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pure purpose of entertaining and avoiding the process of thinking. kids will have a higher chance of learning more from reading or talking to adults about what is happening in their surroundings than from watching television. Correct article usage
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For example
, a study from 2008 that was done in Canada showed that from the ages 1 to 8 years old, children have proven to learn new topics in school by listening to their teacher and asking questions. Linking Words
In addition
to that, it has been shown that in later years there has increased the number of Linking Words
graduated
students who spent less time watching TV.
In conclusion, there are better options for younger individuals when it comes to gaining new information Change the form of the verb
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content with others. In saying Linking Words
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, I do not agree with the statement above because teaching happens in moments that would benefit them better rather than staring at a screen.Linking Words
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