Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A good number of administrations contend that their number-one priority is economic

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, while some hold the view that a country needs other sorts of

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that are equally significant.

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essay puts forward the argument that while economic growth is of vital importance for society, governments should not overlook the importance of other types of

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. Economic

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is the

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priority for many politicians. They assume that

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in

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area is an absolute necessity for a country, without which it cannot flourish in other domains. The other reason they mention

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the salience of financial

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is that economy-related problems,

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as inflation and unemployment, can even endanger the integrity of a nation. They suggest a mountain of evidence in support of their argument.

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, empirical data gathered from a number of Asian and European countries indicate that countries facing economic

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challenges

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challenges

tend to suffer from numerous social and environmental problems.

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, some experts believe that

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in other areas, particularly the social domain, is highly crucial. The main argument they advance is that economic

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can not take place or is not sustainable in a nation

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not socially developed. To illustrate

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point, they propose that economic growth without social considerations leads to inequality. There have been many countries with a high national income at some time, which have experienced grave social and political tensions due to not adopting a balanced and methodical approach to

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. Iraq and Egypt are two prime examples

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issue. In conclusion,

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some political activists think that a developed economy is the most important target for a nation, others assume that

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in other areas is of equal significance. My personal opinion is that economic growth and

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in other areas,

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as the social domain, are

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. We cannot ignore one in favour of the other.