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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

#people #men #women #job #jobs
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of
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people
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the people
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thinks
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 that
women
 and
men
 are the same rights. They are able to do any kind of job that they want.
However
, others assume that
men
 and
women
 are not the same
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 is why there are certain jobs that
women
 can't do it. On one hand, many
people
 believe that
men
 and
women
 have the same rights. In society, they are treated equally. They can participate in all kinds of fields that they want
for example
 doctors, nurses, farmers, labours, engineers etc.
Women
 have the same power as
men
. They don't have any difference. They can do any type of work that they can do and I agree.
On the other hand
, Few
people
 feel that
men
 and
women
 are different. There are certain professions in that only
men
 can participate.
Women
 are not able to take part in all kinds of jobs because they don't have the ability.
Women
 are weak as compared to
men
 and they can join in all kinds of fields. In conclusion, all human beings have the same rights. They have the same energy and strength
therefore
 they can join in any work that they want. In society,
people
 should treat all human beings equally. There
is
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 no differences between them.
In
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result
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a result
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, we can see
men
 and
women
 in all professions.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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