Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different types of people in the
organization
. Some
which
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like working in the same corporation for their whole life and others
who
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change
facilities in search of new growth opportunities. I partially
agrees
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with the former statement. Both viewpoints will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs. On one hand,
Firslty
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Firstly
First
, Many people like working for the same
organization
because of
comfortable
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work culture and the understanding
management
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of management
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. Employees usually
leaves
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the
organization
if they feel more pressure and don't have
an
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understanding
management
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of management
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. To illustrate, According to the results of the survey performed
last
year; employees provide
unethical
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an unethical
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work environment and poor management as one of the main
reason
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reasons
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for leaving their
organization
.
Moreover
, they think that they can grow more if keep working in the same
company
.
For example
, Sundar Pichai
also
works in the same
company
for his whole life. Now, he is known as the CEO of the biggest
technical
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company
in the world.
On the other hand
, Some individual
change
organization
because
other
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another
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facility is providing higher compensation. To elucidate, Competitors provide
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hundred
hundered
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percent
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hike to the new upcoming people.
As a result
,
worker
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a worker
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leaves the
organization
because of
this
compensation.
In addition
to
this
, they
change
company
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companies
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so that they can learn new
skills
by working on different technologies.
For instance
,
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the worker
a worker
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worker
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workers
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only
use
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same
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the same
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skills
that will
be require
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by the
organization
.
On the other hand
, if they move to
different
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the different
a different
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organization
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organizations
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; they can acquire new
skills
by working on their technologies. In Conclusion. both viewpoints have advantages and disadvantages. I believe that
individual
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individuals
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should stay in the
company
if they are comfortable working in the environment and
also
change
organization
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the organization
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if they want to learn new
skills
.
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