Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.
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Social
media
sites
have a huge impact on human beings. Some people
take it positively but others think that these sites
have played a negative role in youngster's life. In my eye, twitter
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facebook
have both advantages and disadvantages.
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To begin
with, social media
has many benefits, such
as it keeps people
connected in their busy lives, especially when everyone is moving abroad in the race of
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share so many knowledgeable posts on internet
which can be beneficial for any one of us.
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, there are some drawbacks of
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sites
as well. Many folks share unethical content on their profile to get more likes and views. On the
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people
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needs
to be aware of social Change the verb form
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media
friends
. They should know only real friends
are the one
to trust on.
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