Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

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effected
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our lives in different ways. There are always pros and cons
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everything.
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media
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sites
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have a huge impact on human beings. Some
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take it positively but others think that these
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have played a negative role in youngster's life. In my eye,
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and
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have both advantages and disadvantages.
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with, social
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has many benefits,
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as it keeps
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connected in their busy lives, especially when everyone is moving abroad in the race
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better
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future. I have many school and college
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whom I found on social
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. It is a great feeling to be reconnected
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my old
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people
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share so many knowledgeable posts on
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which can be beneficial for any one of us.
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, there are some drawbacks
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as well. Many folks share unethical content on their profile to get more likes and views. On
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social
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we can add
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from anywhere in the world,
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can
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younger
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into
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dangerous
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situation
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. Like, they come to know
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personal information,
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weakness. So,
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youngsters
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to be aware of social
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friends
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. They should know only real
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are the
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to trust on. To conclude, I will say social
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sites
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advantages can overweigh disadvantages if they
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wisely.
The social
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network is a great place to learn new things but just be aware
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of making
friends
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on social websites.
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