As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While a group of individuals believe, nowadays
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becoming
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famous Information system because newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. even though
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a summary. On one side of the essay ,
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is a more helpful device in
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life. There for, We can arrange our life using
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with easy. There are, get information quickly , shopping , find jobs and
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marriage
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we can fast read
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newspapers
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news
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papers
on the
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.
For example
: My best friend
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his
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boyfriend
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boy friend
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using
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. and my father
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his car from Ikman.
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.
Then
we can save time and cost. Because of
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is very perform
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than
news
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papers
so
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,
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papers
are becoming
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past it is correct.
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believe
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,
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Because Using the
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it is did not happen. Because our old generation
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addicted to reading
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papers
. They do not like to use modern things or devices. They believe
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a
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different features. But we are in
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century . So we should accept new Things . To wind up my writing, I firmly agree with them.
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we should
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with globalization.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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