In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex school have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, parents have their own choice to send their kids
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single
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school
or co-educational
school
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However
, certain
people
believe that single-sex
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schools
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are not for good
to
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students
as
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compare
compared
to co-educational
schools
.
First
of all, parents can have
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to choose
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they want
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their children to
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a mixed
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school
or
single
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a single
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school
.
As a result
, parents are
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to think and they
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what
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best for their kids. They have choices in the
schools
. In recent years, co-educational is not
provide
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in every society but nowadays we can see in every community there is
a
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option to choose
.
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of
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people
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the people
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that
students
are more self-confident in mixed education
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for example
they can speak in front of
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more positive way,
they
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and they
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can think more
creative
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On the other hand
, Most
people
feel that if their
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toddlers
or
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children
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childrens
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children
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study in single-sex
school
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later they face problems in life. They don't have
mental
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ability or power to think more wisely as
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to
students
who study in co-educations. co-educational
schools
provide different
evironment
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environment
than single-sex
schools
that is
why in society
poeple
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people
prefer to send their children
in
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to
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mixed
schools
so that they be more confident. In conclusion, these days
people
like to send their kids
in
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co-educational
school
and
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agree with that because
students
will
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more creative, more
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up to date
uptodate
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up-to-date
and more confident in mixed gender
schools
as
campare
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compare
compared
to single
schools
.
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