In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex school have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays, parents have their own choice to send their kids
in
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to
single
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a single
school
or co-educational school
. However
, certain people
believe that single-sex school
are not for good Fix the agreement mistake
schools
to
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apply
students
as campare
to co-educational Correct your spelling
compare
compared
schools
.
First
of all, parents can have authority
to choose Correct article usage
the authority
that
they want Correct word choice
whether
send
their children to Add the particle
to send
mixed
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a mixed
school
or single
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a single
school
. As a result
, parents are Add an article
the ability
ability
to think and they Replace the word
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knows
what Change the verb form
know
are
best for their kids. They have choices in the Change the verb form
is
schools
. In recent years, co-educational is not provide
in every society but nowadays we can see in every community there is Change the form of the verb
provided
a
option to chooseChange the article
an
.
Most Change preposition
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of
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people
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the people
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believe
belive
that Correct your spelling
believe
students
are more self-confident in mixed educationAdd the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
they can speak in front of stage
more positive way, Correct article usage
the stage
they
can think more Correct word choice
and they
creative
.
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creatively
On the other hand
, Most people
feel that if their toodlers
or Correct your spelling
toddlers
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children
children's
childrens
study in single-sex Correct your spelling
children
school
later they face problems in life. They don't have Fix the agreement mistake
schools
mental
ability or power to think more wisely as Correct article usage
the mental
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
students
who study in co-educations. co-educational schools
provide different evironment
than single-sex Correct your spelling
environment
schools
that is
why in society poeple
prefer to send their children Correct your spelling
people
in
mixed Change preposition
to
schools
so that they be more confident.
In conclusion, these days people
like to send their kids in
co-educational Change preposition
to
school
and i
agree with that because Change the capitalization
I
students
will be think
more creative, more Change the verb form
be thinking
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up to date
uptodate
and more confident in mixed gender Correct your spelling
up-to-date
schools
as campare
to single Correct your spelling
compare
compared
schools
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