You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter:- * Write why you are writing the letter  * What kind of information you want  * How and by when you can get the requested information

Dear Sir, I, Kuljeet Kaur, currently living with my friend who is living at house no . 142, XYZ locality in the town. I have recently landed in
this
nation on a work visa. I am writing
this
letter to you in order to seek your help in finding a suitable apartment for me.
Also
, I want to gather information about the nearby medical facilities as I am suffering from chronic asthma disease.
Hence
, prior knowledge helps me if there is an emergency.
Moreover
, I want to get
this
information at the earliest so that I can shift to that place.
Thus
, I request you to please share the details of the property with me at my contact number 29xxxxxxxx by the coming Monday.
Also
, I want you to provide me with the desired information regarding healthcare facilities by today evening.
Therefore
, it would be really commendable if you could send me the addresses at the above-mentioned phone number by text. Looking forward to hearing a positive and speedy response from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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