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What is the significant remark from Azerbaijan History.

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 changes phase which encompasses the earliest 19th to 20th century poses a new era for the History of Azerbaijan with the relief of Abbasgulu agha Bakukhanov who was the prominent author of “Gulustani Iram” and others. As a matter of fact, one of his innovations seems to be the chronology of
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 history. Another possible reason is an enlightening civilization which was driven by Mirza Fatali Akhundov, Seyid Azim Shirvani, Hasanbay Zardabi, and others. 2.In general, historical discipline signifies the chronological record of several events in terms of critical analysis. The novel discipline emerged through the integration of history and other sciences. There appear to be an inordinate number of disciplines: historical geography, historical demography, and historical bibliography. 3.There is a way to access past data that seems to be eliciting information from historical sources.
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, there is a preface assortment of sources that are not equivalent to each other. Oral (legends, tales, bayatis), material (stone tools, handicraft wares,), linguistic (disparate information concerning languages), ethnographic (family traditions of different nations), written (handwritings and a lot of monuments), and Cinema-Photo-Phonodocuments are the main example for the historical sources.

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