There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

These days it is
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trend that, married
couples
don'
t
want to have
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children
childrens
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children
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.
This
trend has got its own benefits
such
as satisfaction and challenge as well as
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demerits
like economically and free
time
. There are two advantages of having
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children
childrens
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.
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Firstly
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,
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married
maried
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married
couples
have
lots
of
time
after
work
, so it would be fun and challenging for
themselves
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them
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.
In other words
, when
couples
got married and settled down, they don'
t
have hard
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challenges
challeges
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challenges
such
as,
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job
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a job
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or
have
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having
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problems with
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paying
pain
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paying
for
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bills. They have
lots
of free
time
,so it could be
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choice to have
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children
childrens
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For instance
, in Poland
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has
problem
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a problem
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to
employe
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employ
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people
to
work
. In our country
lots
of
people
decide to don'
t
have
children
,so we don'
t
have hands to
work
.
Secondly
,
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the lover
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lover
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lovers
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could have satisfaction from having
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children
childrens
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children
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. Pairs that, grew up
their
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child correctly could have pleasure.
This
would be
good
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achievement for them to rose obedient
son
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sons
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or
daughter
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daughters
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.
For example
, that
are
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my parents. They are happy and satisfied, that they rose me and my brother
to
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good
people
.
However
, there are two major
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demerits
. Most important is economically site. Having
children
and
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him/her food,
buy
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clothes and much more
it
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costs
lots
of money, so
couples
don'
t
want to have
children
for
this
reason.
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disadvantage is having less
time
. Marries, who have
children
don'
t
have
time
for themselves,they have to look after their kids,
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they can'
t
go to the gym, or
time
for themselves. It is widely known that, in Poland
people
, who have
children
end
work
, pick their
children
from school and go home,after that prepare food, so they are like CD from Monday to Friday they don'
t
have their free
time
. To sum up, there are some benefits of having
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children
childrens
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children
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like
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pleasure
and
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Thailand
,
such
as drawbacks like financial and having less
time
.
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