There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
These days it is
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a growth
growth
trend that, married Replace the word
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couples
don't
want to have Correct your spelling
children
childrens
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children
This
trend has got its own benefits such
as satisfaction and challenge as well as demeris
like economically and free Correct your spelling
demerits
time
.
There are two advantages of having Correct your spelling
children
childrens
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children
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Firstly
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married
maried
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married
couples
have lots
of time
after work
, so it would be fun and challenging for themselves
. Correct pronoun usage
them
In other words
, when couples
got married and settled down, they don't
have hard Correct your spelling
challenges
challeges
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challenges
such
as, find
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finding
job
or Add an article
a job
the job
have
problems with Wrong verb form
having
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paying
pain
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paying
the
bills. They have Correct article usage
apply
lots
of free time
,so it could be right
choice to have Add an article
the right
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children
childrens
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children
For instance
, in Poland government
has Correct article usage
the government
problem
to Add an article
a problem
the problem
employe
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employ
people
to work
. In our country lots
of people
decide to don't
have children
,so we don't
have hands to work
. Secondly
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the lover
lover
could have satisfaction from having Fix the agreement mistake
lovers
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children
childrens
. Pairs that, grew up Correct your spelling
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their
child correctly could have pleasure. Change preposition
with their
This
would be good
achievement for them to rose obedient Add an article
a good
son
or Fix the agreement mistake
sons
daughter
. Fix the agreement mistake
daughters
For example
, that are
my parents. They are happy and satisfied, that they rose me and my brother Change the verb form
is
to
good Change preposition
into
people
.
However
, there are two major demeris
. Most important is economically site. Having Correct your spelling
demerits
children
and give
him/her food, Wrong verb form
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buy
clothes and much more Wrong verb form
buying
it
costs Correct pronoun usage
apply
lots
of money, so couples
don't
want to have children
for this
reason. Next
disadvantage is having less Correct article usage
The next
time
. Marries, who have children
don't
have time
for themselves,they have to look after their kids, moreover
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go to the gym, or time
for themselves. It is widely known that, in Poland people
, who have children
end work
, pick their children
from school and go home,after that prepare food, so they are like CD from Monday to Friday they don't
have their free time
.
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