Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. -Apologize for damaging the product. -Explain what happened. -Say how are you going to fix the issue.

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Dear Jasmine, I hope you are good. I am writing to you to tell you about

static

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the static

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calaculator

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calculator

that I

lended

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lent

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from you

last

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week. I regret damaging your precious and significant device.

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saying sorry is not enough still, I

appologize

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apologise

from the bottom of my heart. Having said that, I want to tell you that I was carrying it to my college

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riding

bicycle

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a bicycle

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, it was in my pocket. Unfortunately, I dropped it on the road and a car rolled

on to

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onto

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therefore

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crushing

into

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it into

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various pieces. Since the road was busy, I was not able to not to pick it up. Since I am

one

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the one

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who is responsible

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I will buy it for you from the same brand.

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will pay for the cost of it.

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, I feel sorry. If you have

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apply

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another idea for paying you back please let me know. Regards Soojana

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Coherence & Cohesion

Try to organize your letter into clearer paragraphs with single ideas in each to improve coherence.

Task Achievement

Avoid repetition of apologies; it's clear from the context that you feel sorry.

Task Achievement

The letter addresses all the necessary points: apology, explanation, and solution, making it a complete response.

Task Achievement

The writing tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend; it's sincere and relatable.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

152 words

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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also do other jobs. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say: - how would you be able to help? - When and why would you do it? - Who will help you to do it?

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this is not justified. Do you agree or disagree?