Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companie. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays, Many small workshops are invisible and
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by huge international
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companies
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companies
. There are various advantages and disadvantages as well and
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will discuss
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the upcoming fourth paragraphs.
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with the advantages, Tiny works is converted by the economic growth and it will be benefits
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the
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person in small
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groups. To explicated, The world technology is
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day by day and economic rates will be rising by the multinational and international
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company's
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because
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will be
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for jobs opportunities in the
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.
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kingdom news
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reveal that in Britain
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small businesses will be replaced by
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united companies
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as
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Starbucks it's food brand will be popular all around the world.
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, In any
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small task's will be increasing by the
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hardship focus on the work
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any
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business's
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will be
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success
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. To commence with the disadvantages, A lot of young people impressed by the famous companies
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and it's will be dangerous for the society and public. To explain, Many campaigns claim that you will
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their
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companies
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companies
and you earn a chunk of money in a smaller time but it's not
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.
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, In an Australian company
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the
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name
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Walmart
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business
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will
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fraud
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of individuals who live in Australia in just
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seconds.
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, It will be
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for unemployment and poor community in the job searching for their nation. In conclusion,
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Small
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business
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businesses
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and large
workplace
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workplaces
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will be
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for their owner hard
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and family support.
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beneficial for
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society and the country's employment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local charm
  • multinational companies
  • economic benefits
  • tax revenues
  • local infrastructure
  • reduce competition
  • monopolistic behavior
  • standardization
  • reliable
  • rural or underserved areas
  • economic disparities
  • foster innovation
  • research and development
  • advancements
  • consumers
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