You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. / Mrs. I am writing

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letter to request my accommodation facilities. As an international ,student I have no idea or experience with my accommodation. On the other ,hand I Do not have anyone and no relatives in the UK. Even though, I like to stay in a college hall of residence . So, I want to stay in one single room with an attached bathroom.

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It should be included A/C or heater , a small kitchen , a study table and chair , a washing machine and clothes rack.

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enough. In the kitchen is very important for me Because I want to prepare meals with my own hands. Because of reason do not worry about my food needs and

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can manage it by myself. Even though , If you can not get these requirements what are the options for

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There for , can you give me some details about Residence in the UK for students

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I hope your answer as soon as possible. Because

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I will hope to migrate in

week. Please be careful. Thank you. Your International Student Gayathri

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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