There is growing evidance that man_made activites are making globle temperatures higher. what might be the men-made causes of temperatures rising ? how sould we deal with this peoblem?

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causes of
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and draw my own conclusion. In terms of the problems, the cars and factories smoke making the
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. The main reason given to support
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impact
significantly in the warming
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global
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and
impact
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environment
in general. To illustrate, in Africa the higher
temperatures
increased between 2000 and 2009.
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had
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impact
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plants and
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animals
.
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decreased
the plants grow makes the
temperatures
higher and the main reason for woods
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fires
.
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, some people had daily
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helped the
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water
become awful day by day.
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, almost people
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every single day.
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of countries don't have
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, the poor counties cannot
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huge
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can't do it.
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the
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shown proved that the man-made had direct effect for the
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environment
and
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global
temperatures
. In conclusion, it is
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evidence
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evidence
that the
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activities
activites
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are making
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global
globle
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global
temperatures
higher. The
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government
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government
must ensure steps are taken to prevent
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phenomenon
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phenomenon
from deteriorating future.
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