It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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Thought out history and in today's contemporary era the value of friendship cannot be overestimated, we are lucky if we have faithful
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in our lives,
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friendship should always be maintained meticulously.
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, I agree that
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a few things
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as borrowing
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from
friends
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sometimes can harm the relationship, it's not always innocuous. I think
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way for two reasons, which I will discuss in
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,
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with, I strongly believe that the base of any relationship is trusting and staunch. Borrowing
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can sometimes affect
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,
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when we are not able to return the
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at a time. My own personal experience is a compelling example of
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, it was the time when I just joined the office and one day my colleague come to me for some help. He need some
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of
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, I trusted him and gave him the
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he need. Now, it has been more than a year and he never talks about
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. His work for which he needs
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, has been done perfectly and the situation is
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fine for him, but I am still waiting for my
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.
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, I feel that there are so many other options available in the market if someone requires
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as
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a bank loan.
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, a few months ago, I want to buy a car but I didn't have so much
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. I decided to take a loan from a bank
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to get it from my friend. I get loans very easily with EMI.
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, 70 per cent of
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the payment
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of
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my car has been completed and within a few
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I will complete all left
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.
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way, I never have to ask any of my
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for
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and enjoy my car enthusiastically. In conclusion, I would like to say that, to maintain a healthy relationship with our
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it's better to avoid borrowing
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from them,
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should think about other options available in the market.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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