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Many children are encouraged to do part time work by parents? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Many parents believe that encouraging their own children to do a part-time job
besides
 their school will help them to grow as credible members of society, but it has certain drawbacks too.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of a child's job and provide a logical conclusion. I believe that young
people
's
work
 has more advantages than drawbacks. At the outset, child
work
also
 has some major disadvantages for several reasons. The strongest argument is their mental stability. Each human being has several stages in his life and each stage of them plays a vital role in building his own character in the future.
Consequently
, to be a mentally stable person you have to process through each of them and get experience by yourself to develop and create your own personality. One and the most important step of them is childhood which should be lived as it is. Playing and having fun is a kind of freedom that should be granted to offspring.
For instance
, most criminals grew up in an unhealthy environment was not include normal offspring activities like a fraction with their peers through playing, which
finally
 leads to unlikely results to
people
 surrounding them and being socially disordered.
However
,
this
 can be avoided by creating a
work
-life balance for them and watching closely when we can stop or continue doing
this
.
On the other hand
, there are too many advantages of children's
work
. In
this
 ,essay we will list the most important benefit of them.
Firstly
 the world needs more leaders and courageous
people
 to manage future success and help our communities.
Moreover
,
this
 can be happened by generating a strong and capable generation who can use current resources to build a better life for all of us.
Thus
, if young men
work
 from their early growing stages,
this
 will support in building a sense of responsibility and reliability which is adequately needed to guarantee
this
 forthcoming success.
For example
, most of the successful
people
's stories included having jobs in childhood like Tesla who invented electricity. To conclude,
Although
 children's
work
 has certain disadvantages like mental instability, it has an extremely positive impact on society and provides a prosperous future for all of us.
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