International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Tourism always has a huge amount of positive points with it
however
in some places are still concerns about the negative impacts on the local nature and community which Linking Words
tourists
can cause. I believe the Use synonyms
tourists
' benefits still outweigh the disadvantages which in Use synonyms
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essay will be discussed.
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First,
the major area in which Linking Words
tourists
will improve in the destination country is their work environment and job opportunities, Use synonyms
while
local inhabitants can open stores and sell their traditional souvenirs or local products. Linking Words
Also
, Linking Words
tourists
are the main way to show places and show something worldwide. Use synonyms
For example
, if foreigners come and visit your historical structures in your country and they enjoy it, Linking Words
as a result
, they will tell the other side of the world and their friends to come and visit that place Linking Words
while
they buy and help local people's business.
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On the other hand
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tourists
always bring negative impacts via themselves. Use synonyms
To begin
, if Linking Words
tourists
do not know about the Use synonyms
rules
of that place they can damage nature or historical items Use synonyms
or
in the museums or any natural places if they do not pay attention to the Correct word choice
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rules
and signs they can cause an abysmal impact. Use synonyms
For instance
, if they feed animals in the zoo, those animals can die and Linking Words
this
happened because the person who did that was a tourist and did not read the Linking Words
rules
. Use synonyms
Also
, the robbery rate may increase in those areas where Linking Words
tourists
will go because most of them carry money and cash, which will make them good prey for thieves.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
tourists
can cause a problem because they are new and do not know the Use synonyms
rules
very well but the positive points outweigh the drawbacks.Use synonyms
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task response
Ensure that the essay fully addresses the prompt by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of international tourism. Also, provide a clear opinion on whether the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.
coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas in a more logical and coherent manner. Make sure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the ideas flow smoothly from one to the next.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...