Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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exploration offers us the chance to learn

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new things.

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, as it costs an exorbitant amount, we need to decide the best way to allocate our

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. I would argue that there are more pressing

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that need addressing but that there may be other ways for us to continue funding

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exploration. There are a number of

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which are still affecting the world today. Despite incredible advancements in science and

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there are still billions of people who struggle with health, education, food and water, shelter and security. Many people suggest that we lack the

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to resolve these

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should not waste billions of dollars on exploring

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.

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, there is much to be learnt from the exploration of

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. There is the possibility of discovering new materials and energy sources. Some scientists even suggest that we may be able to colonize other planets or make contact with other life forms. Given that the universe is so vast, it does not make sense to only focus on our planet. One possibility of continuing to explore the universe while improving the quality of life on earth is through greater cooperation between countries.

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, a global

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agency could be founded which allows

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countries to share their

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would enable countries to allocate funds more effectively and would avoid the duplication of research. In

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it seems immoral to spend money to explore

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instead

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of addressing global

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, it would be ignorant to turn our back on

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. One solution would be to better share our

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in order to benefit mankind