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artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity.some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.ato what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that we should not set any limitations on
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 when expressing their opinions so that they are able to create.Personally,I completely disagree with
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 statement and think
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 should only be allowed a certain range of
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 in their expression. There are some reasons why I argue that
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 should basically follow some restrictions on delivering their ideas.
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,it is because some thoughts and ideas are not appropriate for all human beings,which would sometimes lead to misunderstandings or even misguiding those young generations.
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,when it comes to the topic of racism, gender issues,or stereotype bias against foreign cultures,if
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 were totally free to speak could potentially cause some social problems,which is far worse than the outcome of the development of creativity.
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,it would allow some
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 to break the law in the name of creativity,especially for those
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 who have some kinds of belief problems,and do not receive any punishments.So it is more reasonable to narrow the
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 of
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 to some certain extent in order to have a cohesive society. I strongly think that it is still possible for
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 to cultivate innovations under a certain level of
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.
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 to say,there will be fewer problems while
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 are doing their work,where they clearly aware of where is the red line,
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 can better concentrate on what they permitted to handle .Without worrying about the risk of crossing the limits, they are provided with the true
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 of doing anything they can. In conclusion,
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 essay has already discussed the reasons why it is wrong to give
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 entire
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 to themselves express,
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 it will bring much more drawbacks than advantages.In my opinion,it is more acceptable to speak under certain limits.
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