The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children ? Do you think this the best way to deal the problem ? what other solutions can you suggest ?

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contemporary epoch, schools should be considerably raised the amount of time on several kinds of indoor and outdoor

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as well as

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to minimise the overweight

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of

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. In my perspective, there are numerous other ways to solve

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problem

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which are

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effective. In

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essay, I will elaborate on my visions in the forthcoming paragraphs with effective examples.

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with, schools and other educational institutions should be increased the amount of time on different kinds of physical practice for the purpose of solving the overweight

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of

children

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.

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, It has several merits not only reducing the excess weight

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but

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keeping their body fit and healthy.

Sports

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and

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are crucial for everyone they remove our monotonous and

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us so much pleasure.

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, when the school play an important role in physical

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for their pupils which

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be a habit in their future.

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to

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,

students

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keep their attention on studying and they feel come back to their school.

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to

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, educational institutions arrange regular

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competitions among

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which

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encourage them in

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.

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, there are

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to tackle

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problem

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as eat hygiene food along with

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proper rules in daily

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benificial

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for pupils. Every

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students

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should eat healthy food and make

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practices

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in their

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.

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students

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follow

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life style

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for

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, maintain sleeping like going to bed early and wake up early

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the morning. To cite an example, when a student

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hygience

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and follow regular health

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reduce

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their overweight and keeps their body fit and healthy. There

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various

others practice

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also

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effective in

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children

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life

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Children

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go to

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field

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with their siblings and friends for playing

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differents

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sport

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like soccer,cricket,

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badminton

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also

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effective to solve their overweight problems along with

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their leadership

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, disciple,

time

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management skills. In a nutshell, to recapitulate the aforementioned arguments into deep consideration,

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would like to restate that school solve

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problem

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of

children

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by taking

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above

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is

best

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way to solve

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problem

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. There are

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several

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which

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beneficial for

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