Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

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Dear Sam, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I will be needing your help to set up

an equipment

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equipment

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in my house office later

this

week. Recently, I have accepted a new role with ABC Tiles and the head

quearter

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quarter

quarters

of ABC Tiles is located in Japan. Due to

pandemic

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the pandemic

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, we all are remotely working from home and I have a big presentation coming up which is due

Monday. So I am trying to

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set up

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setup

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set up

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a projector and big monitor in my house so that I can present my work to clients overseas. I recently bought a 56 inches wide monitor and a projector with

projector

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a projector

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screen and it has a lot of complicated wires to fit and would really appreciate your help in doing that.

Also

, while coming to my place it would be great if you can bring your toolbox with you so that we don't lose our time. I would appreciate

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it if

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you can write me back with your time availability

this

saturday

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Saturday

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. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards, Sanket

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Many famous sports players advertise products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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