Crimes and other kinds of information on television and newspaper have adverse consequences. This kind of information to be restricted to be shown in media. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

The advancement of technology has altered the way people live. Many kinds of
Information
come up on media and
television
such
as crimes and other severe cases. It is perceived that
this
kind of
news
should be filtered.
However
, I completely disagree about that statement due to some justifications.
this
essay will elucidate to get a better comprehension. Human beings have a tendency to become worried about the circumstances in their milieu, while
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and
television
become the primary source to attain up-to-date and real
information
, whether it is crimes or general conditions which happen in our country.
Thus
, restricting these kinds of
information
will make them look for the issue without any validity,
such
as hoaxes or false
information
.
For instance
, recently, Indonesian attain the
news
about a murder case of Joshua
that is
committed by one of the
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police, Ferdy Sambo. If Indonesian only consumed the
news
from social media, they might not know the reality that it is
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case because the
first
time,
this
issue was only about conflict among police and sexual abuse.
As a result
, the
television
can confirm the actual accident.
Furthermore
, negative issues
such
as crime have a piece of positive advice for the public.
This
is because the
news
also
has educational content and some purposes for society. Once they get
information
about crimes, it can be grasped as
information
on what not to do, particularly for young generations. Meanwhile, for some students,
this
also
can be
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in terms of academic knowledge.
For example
,law students can learn the processes and newest
information
about the crime until the criminals are jailed. To summarise, some severe
information
on
television
and newspaper has not to be restricted because it can become primary resources for society who has big curiosity and can be the source of knowledge and beneficial insight for some of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Desensitize: To make someone less likely to feel shock or distress at scenes of cruelty or suffering by overexposure to such images.
  • Sensationalism: The use of exciting or shocking stories at the expense of accuracy, to provoke public interest or excitement.
  • Media Ethics: Principles and standards of conduct relating to the role and responsibilities of press and broadcast professionals.
  • Perception: The way in which something is regarded, understood, or interpreted.
  • Ignorance: Lack of knowledge or information.
  • Balance in Reporting: Presenting both sides of an issue or argument to provide a fair understanding.
  • Preparedness: A state of readiness, especially for unexpected events or emergencies.
  • Social Learning Theory: A theory that suggests people learn from observing others, including the behaviors, attitudes, and outcomes of those behaviors.
  • PTSD (Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder): A mental health condition triggered by experiencing or witnessing a terrifying event.
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