In the future, no body will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Newspapers
and
books
has
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played a major role in
peoples
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lives
since
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early as we can remember.For Centuries
people
have been various types of reading material but none of them
have
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been able to replace
books
or
Newspapers
.
However
in the recent past, With Covid 19 Pandemic
people
searched for other options and touchless options were
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and found more healthy as even a touch could have prevented a life threat.
Newspapers
and
books
gives
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a
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personal space to the
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reader
readed
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and more physical attachment for the reader,
On the other
hand
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people
tend to collect
books
and papers for other benefits as well eg; For
wrpapping
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wrapping
purposes, for Libraries, etc.Hard copies can be secured in a stored place and
its
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a
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easy access to everyone who requires to read. When it comes to online reading unlike reading a physical book you can read your book or Newspaper through your mobile
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smartphone
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smart phone
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.It can give you numerous advantages
such
as no
requriement
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requirement
or hassle of taking or buying
books
. It
also
can be stored and can be shared among more
people
even without meeting them in person In my
personnel
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view
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,view
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I feel that
in to
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days context it
more
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advantageous to use online
platform
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for reading
Newspapers
and
books
. It is economical,
time saving
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and more than anything
its
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healthier for mother nature as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital media
  • accessible
  • advancements
  • user-friendly
  • environmental impact
  • reducing paper consumption
  • digital reading devices
  • economic implications
  • monetization models
  • demographics
  • collectibility
  • ease of annotation
  • reduced screen time
  • negative impacts
  • literacy
  • reading habits
  • promoting access
  • cultural significance
  • historical significance
  • transition
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