the charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's Share of the Japanese tourist market

The two charts depict the number of people in Japan who travel abroad and

Australia

's contribution

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Japanese

tourist market over the 10 years from 1985.

Overall

, the number of foreign visits showed a continuous rise during the period

whereas

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's contribution

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Japan's tourist market showed a remarkable improvement. Looking at the data for the number of travelling abroad, only 5 million

Japanese

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took

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foreign visits in 1985. Following a steady rise, the

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was more than double its initial

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in 1990.During the second half of the survey, the

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of

Japanese

who took foreign tours were continuously rise and hit a maximum of 15 million in 1995.

According to

the data for

Australia

's share of Japan's tourist market, the share was almost zero before 1985.

However

, the percentage of

Japanese

who came to

Australia

in 1985 was 2%. The share

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steadily rose just below 5% in 1988

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before it had a slight drop in 1989.

However

, again the

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grew

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continuously

and reached the

maxium

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maximum

of more than 6% in 1993.

Then

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it showed

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reduction and hit 6%