Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

There are various methods of teaching for teaching staff to adopt including practical lessons,
lectures
, online, presentations, seminars, etc.
However
, the method of teaching to be adopted depends on the type of
students
being taught as well as the
teacher
's personal experience with the particular method of teaching. Listening to a lecture for excessive periods of
time
can be boring for many
students
, which is why most
students
seem to dislike the idea of
such
old teaching styles.
This
has to do with the carrying out of the same task for long periods of
time
. The lack of breaks reduces concentration levels in a person.
Lectures
also
require
students
to be sitting down for quite a while, which can be straining for the back muscles, again making the
students
lose concentration.
This
can be counterattacked by the adoption of online teaching methods.
Students
can stand up during the lesson from
time
to
time
to avoid muscle pain as well as strain
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the eyes. One person lecturing an enormous number of
students
could
also
be a
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heinous
tedious
task for the
teacher
. The focus on each
student
would be lower,
hence
, the
teacher
wouldn't be able to clearly differentiate between the
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students
with the lower ones. The focus on each
student
would be significantly lower.
This
could
also
affect the
student
's level of understanding of the subject criteria as some of their questions
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unanswered by the lecturer. Online teaching could avoid
such
situations as the
students
can personally contact the
teacher
to clear any existing doubts regarding
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matter. Another problem with
lectures
is that some
students
who reside significantly
further
away from the university/college may find it uncomfortable to travel
such
large distances for
lectures
. They may
also
lose sleep over trying to leave home early, which could again affect the mental capacity of the
student
. The use of online teaching methods
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, would require all
students
to join in at the same
time
and the problem of travelling wouldn't be a factor for
students
. Travelling expenses would
also
be cut down, which the
students
could perhaps use for other personal uses
such
as paying rent or utility bills.
Further
advantages of online learning include the wider scope of resources.
For example
, the lecturer could upload teaching material on a cloud platform on the internet rather than printing hard copies for each
student
.
Students
can
also
submit
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assignments
assigments
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assignments
in a matter of seconds, which could be easily reviewed by teachers.
However
, there are a few disadvantages of online education as well. A
student
could lose concentration immediately, once given access to the internet.
This
is because the internet contains multiple distractions
such
as social media or even computer games. One solution is that
students
can set focus assists to help them stay focused during class timings. Another disadvantage is that teachers of older generations would not be
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with using online facilities
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and perhaps even be slower delivering the course online.
This
would lead to all the
students
losing motivation to complete a certain course.
Moreover
, practical lessons are difficult to conduct online as
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required for the lesson to run
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more smoothly. As summarised above, the advantages easily outweigh the disadvantages of online learning. In my opinion, I think that online teaching should
also
be adopted as a method of teaching because of
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numerous benefits, not only to the organisation's faculty
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but
also
to the
students
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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