Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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There are various methods of teaching for teaching staff to adopt including practical lessons,

lectures

, online, presentations, seminars, etc.

However

, the method of teaching to be adopted depends on the type of

students

being taught as well as the

teacher

's personal experience with the particular method of teaching. Listening to a lecture for excessive periods of

time

can be boring for many

students

, which is why most

students

seem to dislike the idea of

such

old teaching styles.

This

has to do with the carrying out of the same task for long periods of

time

. The lack of breaks reduces concentration levels in a person.

Lectures

also

require

students

to be sitting down for quite a while, which can be straining for the back muscles, again making the

students

lose concentration.

This

can be counterattacked by the adoption of online teaching methods.

Students

can stand up during the lesson from

time

to avoid muscle pain as well as strain

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the eyes. One person lecturing an enormous number of

students

could

also

be a

henious

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heinous

tedious

task for the

teacher

. The focus on each

student

would be lower,

hence

, the

teacher

wouldn't be able to clearly differentiate between the

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students

with the lower ones. The focus on each

student

would be significantly lower.

This

could

also

affect the

student

's level of understanding of the subject criteria as some of their questions

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maybe

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unanswered by the lecturer. Online teaching could avoid

such

situations as the

students

can personally contact the

teacher

to clear any existing doubts regarding

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matter. Another problem with

lectures

is that some

students

who reside significantly

further

away from the university/college may find it uncomfortable to travel

such

large distances for

lectures

. They may

also

lose sleep over trying to leave home early, which could again affect the mental capacity of the

student

. The use of online teaching methods

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, would require all

students

to join in at the same

time

and the problem of travelling wouldn't be a factor for

students

. Travelling expenses would

also

be cut down, which the

students

could perhaps use for other personal uses

such

as paying rent or utility bills.

Further

advantages of online learning include the wider scope of resources.

For example

, the lecturer could upload teaching material on a cloud platform on the internet rather than printing hard copies for each

student

Students

can

also

submit

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assignments

assigments

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assignments

in a matter of seconds, which could be easily reviewed by teachers.

However

, there are a few disadvantages of online education as well. A

student

could lose concentration immediately, once given access to the internet.

This

is because the internet contains multiple distractions

such

as social media or even computer games. One solution is that

students

can set focus assists to help them stay focused during class timings. Another disadvantage is that teachers of older generations would not be

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familiar

with using online facilities

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and perhaps even be slower delivering the course online.

This

would lead to all the

students

losing motivation to complete a certain course.

Moreover

, practical lessons are difficult to conduct online as

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presence of both parties

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required for the lesson to run

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more smoothly. As summarised above, the advantages easily outweigh the disadvantages of online learning. In my opinion, I think that online teaching should

also

be adopted as a method of teaching because of

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numerous benefits, not only to the organisation's faculty

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but

also

to the

students

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Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

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