Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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There are various methods of teaching for teaching staff to adopt including practical lessons,

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, online, presentations, seminars, etc.

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, the method of teaching to be adopted depends on the type of

students

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being taught as well as the

teacher

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's personal experience with the particular method of teaching. Listening to a lecture for excessive periods of

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can be boring for many

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, which is why most

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seem to dislike the idea of

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old teaching styles.

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has to do with the carrying out of the same task for long periods of

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. The lack of breaks reduces concentration levels in a person.

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require

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to be sitting down for quite a while, which can be straining for the back muscles, again making the

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lose concentration.

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can be counterattacked by the adoption of online teaching methods.

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can stand up during the lesson from

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to avoid muscle pain as well as strain

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the eyes. One person lecturing an enormous number of

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could

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be a

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heinous

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task for the

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. The focus on each

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would be lower,

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, the

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wouldn't be able to clearly differentiate between the

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students

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with the lower ones. The focus on each

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would be significantly lower.

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could

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affect the

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's level of understanding of the subject criteria as some of their questions

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unanswered by the lecturer. Online teaching could avoid

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situations as the

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can personally contact the

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to clear any existing doubts regarding

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matter. Another problem with

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is that some

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who reside significantly

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away from the university/college may find it uncomfortable to travel

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large distances for

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. They may

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lose sleep over trying to leave home early, which could again affect the mental capacity of the

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. The use of online teaching methods

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, would require all

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to join in at the same

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and the problem of travelling wouldn't be a factor for

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. Travelling expenses would

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be cut down, which the

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could perhaps use for other personal uses

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as paying rent or utility bills.

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advantages of online learning include the wider scope of resources.

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, the lecturer could upload teaching material on a cloud platform on the internet rather than printing hard copies for each

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can

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submit

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assignments

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assignments

in a matter of seconds, which could be easily reviewed by teachers.

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, there are a few disadvantages of online education as well. A

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could lose concentration immediately, once given access to the internet.

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is because the internet contains multiple distractions

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as social media or even computer games. One solution is that

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can set focus assists to help them stay focused during class timings. Another disadvantage is that teachers of older generations would not be

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familiar

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and perhaps even be slower delivering the course online.

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would lead to all the

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losing motivation to complete a certain course.

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, practical lessons are difficult to conduct online as

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presence of both parties

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required for the lesson to run

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more smoothly. As summarised above, the advantages easily outweigh the disadvantages of online learning. In my opinion, I think that online teaching should

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be adopted as a method of teaching because of

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numerous benefits, not only to the organisation's faculty

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to the

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

8.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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577 words

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Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a Positive or a negative development

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